Analysis of Her face

Lievert Thamaga 2002 (Limpopo)



As i stood there,
getting a wonderful morning breeze
was deep in my thoughts, an awesome
aroma coming from the south; looking
all the butterflies in the garden.

There she was,
with beautiful cheeks, eyes,
with mesmerizing look that
made me to admire and adore
her the most, with such innocent
face and a heart that is filled with
 all the qualities a man can dream of.

As i turned around,
her face was filled with adorable
smile that made me loose my inner
voice; There she was, her face lighten
by the sun .

I breathed heavily still admiring
her looks, her face was perfect with
such high credit balance of humanity;
Such an angel that made my heart to
beat faster with such an equivalent
speed.

I stood there with no words to express
how pompous and gorgeous her face is,
making me to run out of words but only
letting my heart to run wild.


Scheme XXXAB XXXXCDX XXXBB ADEXCX XXEX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 100100101 11011110 0101010110 10100010 111 110011 110011 11101001 00111100 10011111 1010001111 11101 011110100 11111110 11110110 101 111001010 01011011 11101010100 111011111 1101110100 1 111111101 110010011 10111111110 1011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 822
Words 157
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 7, 5, 6, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 133
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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