Analysis of A Borrowed Dream



I had you
once
before I lost you in a dream
A dream that I woke up
from
where you stayed beyond my grasp

Visiting me each
night
in the bartered hours of my sleep
Holding me beyond
hope
ever cradling my fear

Lending me back to
myself
inside this borrowed joy
Until the dawn reminds
again
—I had you once

(To Laura Nyro: March, 2021)


Scheme ABXXXX XXXXXX AXXXXB X
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1 01111001 011111 1 1110111 10011 1 001010111 10101 1 1010011 10111 1 01111 010101 01 1111 11011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 316
Words 66
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by sage48 on March 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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