Analysis of Intimate immortality

Robert Rittel 1960 (Koblenz)



In remembrance of that virtual dream,
clear impressions like a movie stream.
Time in different sphere filling impressions,
something of another mind expressions.
Living about in a world not realized,
the mortal nature by different image surprised.
Images of youth and its imaginary affection,
escaping into worlds of loving recollection.
Stimulant stories whatever they may,
fountain of enlighten picture for the day.
Dream weaver and master light of seeing,
treasure and miracle at moments of our being.
Dark silence and truth seeming awake,
impressions that shifts the willing to wake.
Facing by ridicule and wonder that endeavor,
knowing that the impossible is in your favor.
That enmity recognized as soul of joy,
no one can abolish or try to destroy.
Our souls have access to the immortal air,
living forces captured by innocent affair.
The dream through radiance once so bright,
gentle power that remains in bliss behind.
Primal sympathies and its soothing habitat,
volunteering heart to treasure that.
Intimate bliss in tender healing abound,
echoes from the immortal destiny ground.


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKLMMNN
Poetic Form
Metre 0010111001 101010101 10100110010 1010101010 1001001110 0101011001001 10011010100010 010011110010 100101011 10101010101 1100101110 10010011011010 110011001 0101101011 101100101010 1010010010110 1100101111 11101011101 10111100101 101010110001 011100111 10101010101 10100011010 01011101 10010101001 10100101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,065
Words 171
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 894
Words per stanza (avg) 171
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Robert Rittel

Robert Rittel, born in 1960 in Koblenz, Germany was raised in a St. Franciscan orphanage. As a trained chef I travelled many countries and today I know that it was a search for the deeper meaning of life and its mysterious wonders. In 1996, I came to South Africa, got married and as all reasons create consequences, I met some inspirational people who pointed me to my spiritual inheritance. By studying Astrology it created the passion and love for the ancient knowledge of the Vedas. Vedic Astrology provides a refined understanding of the soul’s purpose and opens the doors of perceptions towards our spiritual and real circumstance. more…

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