Analysis of Relax!! I Need to Feel Relax



•After too long suffering until climax, I need little rest I need to relax..
•To relax from feeling very nervous & becoming so stressed from all your so bad acts..
•That caused cracks in my mind & deep wound in my chest & a burned heart like heated wax..
•To relax from not seeing myself & how much am oppressed from your wrong judgment & your attacks..
•That not only overtax me but put me in hard patience test & let me turn my strong will to be weak & lax..
•To relax from not being myself but full of fears I expressed for being pushed from all of you, to follow your tracks..
•That costs me a life tax too high; a missing life not blessed & prevent me to back on my feet & to correct wrong facts..
•To relax from living my whole life, doing all my best to satisfy you while you do all what you can to ensure I'll never feel relax..


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Characters 882
Words 167
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 81
Words per line (avg) 21
Letters per stanza (avg) 650
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Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan .. an egyptian poems writer "on line" & I published my 1st poem on line " falling down " on 2002 & win "award winning poet" Pin on 2012 from www.poetry.com "Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2021. Web. 18 Feb. 2021. . more…

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