Analysis of Untitled 2

Jodi hamilton 1981 (Toronto)



I want you to be the one I want till (forever)   Give you up nah never. I want you and me together forever and ever. Two spirits let’s run free cuz there’s no taming you. And no taming me.

You wanna steal my heart baby you can. You already did. It just took one glance and my eyes were hooked. t’s too late I’m in love. I can’t unlook.

What more would you want for me from a guy ....than that?

I’m not leaving him. No never.
He’s funny. He’s sweet. He’s everything I always wanted every Other guy before him to be.

You said cross your heart and hope to die. Bonnie to my Clyde. Will you ride or die.

You could be my Romeo. I’ll be your Juliette only we’ll rewrite the ending. So you end up with me

Cuz pretty baby I’m down on one knee.


Scheme A X X XA X A A
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011110101111101110101001001011011111110101101 11011110111010111111011011111101111 111111110111 11101110 11011110111010010101111 1111101111011111111 11111011100110101010111111 1101011111
Characters 759
Words 149
Sentences 22
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 68
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted on February 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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