Analysis of When You Lose Your First Child

Michael Nicodemus 1969 (Gresham, Oregon)



When you lose your first child,
And you realy miss him;
You just want to go wild,
But you know he was a special gem.

Now all you want to do is just give up,
But you know you have a friend out there;
You know he can keep you up
‘Cause he truly does care.

That first child was bery special to you,
And if he wasn’t, you would’ve left him;
But he loved and needed you,
So, you kept that terrific gem.

You had someone to cherish for a lifetime,
But now the time is gone;
So, you need a friend to help you through the hard times,
And a friend you can always count on.

Somebody wants to be your friend,
And help you in the time of need;
He knows he can be a good friend,
And do a good deed.

Michael J. Nicodemus
July 11, 1989
Revised August 6, 2020


Scheme ABAC DEDE FBFC XXGX HIHI GXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 01111 111111 111110101 1111111111 111110111 1111111 111011 111111011 01111111 1110101 11110101 111110101 110111 111011111011 00111111 1011111 01100111 11111011 01011 1011 1 0110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 726
Words 155
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by michaeln.78865 on February 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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