Analysis of Your Tears
Jase Lucero Pinski 2003 (Great Falls)
I see tears trailing down your face
Your almost always smiling it’s so out of place
I want to comfort you wipe away that salty waste
I want to feel your lips but happiness I won’t taste
You avoid my eyes but I know what I would see
Anger and frustration all caused by me
I say don’t hate
We can still date
You yell “CONCENTRATE”
It’s too late
I hear the pitter patter of your feet
As you run you scream “I can’t love a cheat”
Without you I’m not complete
I can’t compete
I made a mistake
My hearts about to break
You’re tears create a lake
In which I am going to drown
I let you down
Please smile don’t frown
Look at me with eyes so beautiful brown
I thought our love was bound
I am like a pup in a pound
Lost but never found
My heads spinning around
Heart pounded to the ground
Can’t make a sound
This poem was meant for you
But I’m sad too
We were together for years
My tears
Copyright © Jase Pinski | Year Posted 2021
Scheme | AABBCCDDDDEEEEFFFGGGGHHHHHHIIJKL |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110111 1111011111 1111011011101 1111111100111 101111111111 1000101111 1111 1111 1110 111 110110111 1111111101 0111101 1101 11001 110111 110101 01111011 1111 1111 1111111001 1110111 11101001 11101 111001 110101 1101 1101111 1111 1001011 11 1011110 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 929 |
Words | 188 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 32 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 716 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 188 |
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Submitted on January 29, 2021
Modified on March 26, 2023
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