Analysis of Sun
You disappear as the moon starts to shine. Despite knowing you would leave once again, as you do every night. I waited for your warmth and light.
As you leave, I become dull and slump. Hoping that the next day, you will still rise up. The nightlight doesn’t shine as bright as you. I think the moon becomes jealous of what you do.
As the moon starts to fade away, I fill with excitement. Knowing you are here to stay. You begin to rise, as do I. My face meets with yours and the world begins to cry. They will never understand the joy that you bring me inside.
With you, I stand taller and brighter. As I indulge in every beam of light you shine upon me, know that you are the key to my growth. My cells scream “grow, grow higher, reach for the sky” as if they don’t already know that I try.
You give your light to the rest of the world, but no one’s experience is the same or even close to mine. I long for your touch, the warmth that you bring. It makes me believe in hearing the church bells ring.
You never fail to let me down, even on the rainiest of days. Because I know somewhere, behind those clouds, your beams of light continue to blaze. I cannot comprehend how lucky I am that God has allowed me to be in your presence.
As the day is progressing, my heart starts stressing. Obsessing over the time I have with you. Just the thought of you, makes me coo. If only they knew how you make me feel, maybe they would feel the magic too.
To long for your touch is an understatement. Maybe that is why I clutch to the very thought of being able to be held in your arms. My heart swells when I think of you. It’s almost as though our minds are in sync because when I think of you, that is when you give a wink.
So here I am sitting, reminiscing on our time together. Thinking about how much I will be missing you when you are gone. Wishing that once, just once, I could be kissing you for all of eternity.
The day is almost done, and the moon begins to come after my happiness. The light you bring to my life is quite nothing like the world has ever seen before. Despite you being miles and miles away, loving you is never a question.
Loving you is the answer to all my fears about what life holds for me. Years and years could go by but there will never be a day where I don’t continue to pray about being able to see you whenever I please. Knowing that you are always here with me, puts my heart at ease. I am begging you please, don’t leave.
As the moon begins to settle, a petal starts to fall. Now I stand here, alone at night, patiently waiting for your warmth and light.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011011110110111101111100111011101 1111011011010111111101111111110101101111 1011110111101010111111011111111111001011111100101111101 11111001011010100111110111111011111111110110111110101111 111110110111101001011101111111101111111010100111 110111111010100110111101111111010111100111011111011110110 10110101111001010011111101111111101111111101110101 11111111001011111101011101011101111111111111110110101111111111101 111110010110101010011111110111111011111111011110100 011110010111101100011111111101011101010111010101101110010 1011010111101111111011111111010111101011011010111010111011111111111111101111 10101110010111111101111001011101 |
Characters | 2,595 |
Words | 509 |
Sentences | 41 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 12 |
Lines Amount | 12 |
Letters per line (avg) | 166 |
Words per line (avg) | 42 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,994 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 509 |
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Submitted on January 27, 2021
Modified on April 13, 2023
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