Analysis of One Last Breath



Despair denies a red sunrise; Hope seeks blue eternal skies.

Life unfolds in somber refrain;
A simple vote will ease our pain.

No sunset on pillow's grace tonight;
Peace exhales uncolored light.

Waves still break on shifting sand;
Walk not backward as we stand.

Let sullen hues caress your sighs,
And faith eternal take your nighs.

I am the love which voids disdain;
Give future's time to sink your pain.

Even after a dark, stormy night;
We have a star to share our fight.

We will rise upon this death;
Let our hearts have one last breath.


Scheme A BB CC DD AA BB CC EE
Poetic Form
Metre 01010111110101 10101001 010111101 1111101 1111 1111101 1110111 11010111 01010111 11011101 11011111 101001101 110111101 1110111 11011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 525
Words 97
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Modified on March 14, 2023

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Tami Towers

I have been writing poetry most of my life. I am an Educator of over 30 years with an MA, Ed. more…

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