Analysis of How I View Your Mind.



I view your mind as something different every time.

As you said. Your mind is full of surprises. And you never fail to surprise me with what you say.

Sometimes I see it as a 1850's coffee shop, where we both sit and pass letters containing our thoughts on small pieces of parchment. It rains and we enjoy our coffee, enjoy our company and I watch, as you trace your finger along the window, racing a raindrop down the cold glass.

Sometimes I view your mind as a park, we sit under a tree, with a city behind us, the stars above us and a world of possibilities hanging below our feet.

Other times I see it as a house with rooms with post it notes plastered all over the walls, we walk in circles and evetime we say a word with some significant meaning, another post it note is added, right in front of our eyes. It's different every time. And my favorite post it note has the word "you" on it.


Scheme X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101001001 111111110100110110111111 01111101101111101100101011110110110101101001101000111111100101010011011 011111101111001101001101011001101001001101 1011111011111111011001110100111011101001001011111010111011100100101100111101111
Characters 901
Words 174
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 141
Words per line (avg) 35
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on January 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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