Analysis of I am a lost river



I am a lost river.
 Then I had a dream,
 Thousands of people clapped when they heard my song.
 It's hard to control all this life.
I would go to the other side of the thread bridge outside the forest.
 My songs were spreading on social media themselves .
 Analysis of feelings. Feedback:
 There will always be violence and hatred.

The doctor at the hospital could not do anything but  try.
I became the glass from the shiny mirror.
 You are looking for accommodation,
 You must be allowed to live,
We will end homelessness on the streets.
I live in a park.
Its name is earth .
I believe if you keep your faith,
You keep your trust,, if you’re grateful,
You’ll see God open up new doors.
I planted crops in the desert.
 I dried up, took a bath, thought of my loss.

Rivers are a spectrum disorder: I came of from the hill then ran.....
 From dry / damp / wet ice.
 How high is the water,
Looks like we'll be blessed with that.
 A little more rain is another sign.
 I am lost in the great waters of the sea at last…..


Scheme AXXXXXXX XAXXXXXXXXXX XXAXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 11101 10110111111 11101111 11110101101111010 1101011010001 01001101 1111100010 01010101111011 10101101010 111010010 1110111 111100101 11001 1111 10111111 11111110 11110111 11010010 1111011111 10101001011110111 11111 111010 1111111 0101110101 1110011010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 998
Words 193
Sentences 20
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 12, 6
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 254
Words per stanza (avg) 65
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Submitted on January 17, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Mothi Matthew Ashraf

An indian writer, publisher and songwriter singer. https://anchor.fm/bnmr https://manobotaralo.data.blog https://gurudev.fws.store more…

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