Analysis of The Day God Called You Home



God looked around his garden,
and he found a empty place.
He looked down upon earth,
and saw your tired face.

He knew that you were suffering.
He knew that you was in pain.
He knew that you would never
get well on earth again.

He put his arms around you
and lifted you to rest.
Gods garden must be beautiful,
he always takes the best.

He knew the road was getting ruff,
and those hill were hard to climb.
So he closed your weary eyelids,
and whispered "Peace be thine.".

It broke our hearts to lose you,
but you didn't go alone.
For part of us went with you
the day God called you home.


Scheme XAXA XXXX BCXC XXXX BXBX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (20%)
Metre 1101110 0110101 111011 011101 11110100 1111101 1111110 111101 1111011 010111 11011100 11101 11011101 0110111 1111101 010111 11101111 1110101 1111111 011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 579
Words 118
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on January 13, 2021

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Summer Key

This was a poem I wrote at 11 years old. It was for my dad that had passed away from lung cancer when I was 7 years old. He ment alot to me. He was my world. I wrote the poem to try to express how I was feeling because I was still grieving. more…

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