Analysis of Willow Lake



His tongue
Lapping up Willow Lake
Made ripples
I rode them
To the base of the mountain
Where I sat on my throne
A stump rising
From the water
King for a day
My face beaming
Kissed by the sun
My hair made golden
From there I watched
Two beautiful creatures
Walking together
Rejoicing in the wonder
Beneath and before them
Their voices
Bouncing over the lake
Echoing
Up the mountain
Then stillness
A snapshot of a moment
In our time
On our paths
The three of us
Together


Scheme ABCDEFGHIGEEJKHHDLBGEMNOPMH
Poetic Form
Metre 11 10111 110 111 1011010 111111 0110 1010 1101 1110 1101 11110 1111 110010 10010 0100010 010011 110 101001 100 1010 110 011010 0101 1101 0111 010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 443
Words 89
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 380
Words per stanza (avg) 89
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Daniel Millard

I have always loved the written word and expressing my truest and highest self. I love books. I love nature and simplicity. My deepest passion is self-love, growth, spiritual journey, and opening my heart to the world. more…

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