Analysis of Goodbye

Gabby Everett 2000 (Tennessee)



Broken pieces lie within.
Like shattered glass that has pierced the skin.
A painful thought but you feel nothing.
You’re use to all the pain and suffering.
Any emotion that comes to mind, you push down, deep inside.
Nothing phases you any longer.
Every moment you grow stronger and stronger.
Until the sun sets and you lie to sleep.
All alone.
Under your sheets.
Close your eyes
but all you see
is yourself drowning in the sadness
that seems to never leave.
Depression has entered.
Insomnia hits.
Your only escape from reality has vanished.
You replenish your thoughts, now once more…
You can’t get out of this nightmare of horror.
All your insecurities screaming at you.
nowhere to turn and no one to ask
For help to get out of this shattering glass
You’re left alone to pick yourself up.
But what’s the point when you’re never enough?
That is the point.
None at all.
There is no reason for you to go on.
So this is the end I’m sorry to do this.
But I have no one and I can’t take it.
I can’t bare the pain of this pointless life.
I’m sorry to all, that I ended it tonight


Scheme AABBCDDEFGHIJKLMNODPQRSTUVWXYZ1
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101 110111101 010111110 1111010100 100101111111101 101011010 100101110010 0101101111 101 1011 111 1111 101100010 111101 010110 01001 11001110110 101011111 1111111110 1101001011 11101111 11111111001 110111011 1001111001 1101 111 1111011111 11101110111 1111101111 1110111101 110111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,081
Words 202
Sentences 25
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 31
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 834
Words per stanza (avg) 202
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Submitted on January 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Gabby Everett

My name is gabby, I’m 21 years old. I have had a love for writing and poetry since I was little. The first poem I remember writing I was 8 years old. I’m a very closed off person so I enjoy expressing my thoughts and emotions through my words and my writing. more…

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