Analysis of Pain

Yvette M. Sanchez 1964 (Ohio)



All this pain,
What do you gain?
Nothing I say.
But I'm the one who has to pay.
For What?
A kick in the butt?
Why? Why?
I say with a sigh.
What are you trying to prove?
Acting like you got your groove.
You take and take.
Your so fake.
I wish you'd drown in a lake.
Go ahead and make my day,
Cause you'll be the one to pay.


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFFBB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 111 1111 1011 11011111 11 01001 11 11101 1111011 1011111 1101 111 1111001 1010111 1110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 308
Words 71
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 233
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted by Estrella925 on January 06, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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