Analysis of My body and my mind



My body and my mind

Both has faded slowly over time

My body and my mind

The world has taken so much, but these are still mine

My body and my mind

I fight to control you both as I clearly see the signs

My body and my mind

I move slower and take even more time

My body and my mind

I will keep fighting until a cure they will find

My body and my mind

My hand is shaking as I try to compose this rhyme


Scheme A b A x A x A b A a A b
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 111010101 110011 011101111111 110011 11101111110101 110011 1110011011 110011 111100101111 110011 1111011110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 386
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Submitted by HollowMan on January 05, 2021

Modified on March 06, 2023

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