Analysis of Elba Blues



That unshared secret…
a crawlspace of denial
where shadows keep your heart at bay,
lonely all the while

To hide in darkened corners,
as falsehood lends its smile
your mind left cramped—all virtue tramped,
banished and exiled

(Dreamsleep: September, 2020)


Scheme XXXA XAXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 011010 1111111 10101 1101010 11111 11111101 1001 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 250
Words 40
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 69
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on September 23, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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