Analysis of Falling Petals



Asking for support and not your agreement,
I looked into your eyes

Seeing rejection, a stare blank and cold,
all connection was untied

Words became hollow, our rose only thorns,
a new distance did we share

Alone while together, the ending in sight
—reality laid bare

(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2020)


Scheme XX XX XA XA X
Poetic Form
Metre 10101011010 110111 1001001101 1010101 10110101101 0110111 01101001001 1011 01001010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 300
Words 50
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 49
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on August 09, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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