Analysis of Broken Pitcher, The

William Edmondstoune Aytoun 1813 (Edinburgh) – 1865 (Lhanbryde)




It was a Moorish maiden was sitting by a well,
And what the maiden thought of I cannot, cannot tell.
When by there rode a valiant knight from the town of Oviedo,
Alphonso Guzman was he hight, the Count of Desparedo.

"Oh, maiden, Moorish maiden! why sitt'st thou by the spring?
Say, dost thou seek a lover, or any other thing?
Why gazest thou upon me, with eyes so large and wide,
And wherefore doth the pitcher lie broken by thy side?"

"I do not seek a lover, thou Christian knight so gay,
Because an article like that hath never come my way;
And why I gaze upon you, I cannot, cannot tell,
Except that in your iron hose you look uncommon swell.

"My pitcher it is broken, and this the reason is,
A shepherd came behind me, and tried to snatch a kiss;
I would not stand his nonsense, so ne'er a word I spoke,
But scored him on the costard, and so the jug was broke.

"My uncle, the Alcayde, he waits for me at home,
And will not take his tumbler until Zorayda come.
I cannot bring him water, the pitcher is in pieces,
And so I'm sure to catch it, 'cos he wallops all his nieces."

"Oh, maiden, Moorish maiden! wilt thou be ruled by me!
So wipe thine eyes and rosy lips, and give me kisses three;
And I'll give thee my helmet, thou kind and courteous lady,
To carry home the water to thy uncle, the Alcayde."

He lighted down from off his steed, he tied him to a tree,
He bowed him to the maiden, and took his kisses three:
"To wrong thee, sweet Zorayda, I swear would be a sin!"
He knelt him at the fountain, and he dipped his helmet in.

Up rose the Moorish maiden, behind the knight she steals,
And caught Alphonso Guzman up tightly by the heels;
She tipped him in, and held him down beneath the bubbling water,
"Now, take thou that for venturing to kiss Al Hamet's daughter!"

A Christian maid is weeping in the town of Oviedo;
She waits the coming of her love, the Count of Desparedo.
I pray you all in charity, that you will never tell,
How he met the Moorish maiden beside the lonely well.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEAA FXGG XXXF HHHB HHII JJKK BBAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1101010110101 0101011110101 1111010110110010 010101110111 1101010111101 1111010110101 111011111101 011010110111 1111010110111 01110011110111 0111011110101 01101101110101 1101110010101 0101011011101 1111110110111 111101010111 11001111111 01111100111 11011100101010 011111111101110 1101010111111 11110101011101 011111011010010 1101010111001 11011111111101 1111010011101 11111111101 11110100111100 1101010010111 0101010110101 1110011101010010 11111100111110 010111000110010 110101010111 11110100111101 11101010010101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,979
Words 398
Sentences 18
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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William Edmondstoune Aytoun

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