Analysis of Black Sheep



"Black Sheep, Black Sheep,
Have you any wool?"
"That I have, my Master,
Three bags full."

One is for the mother who prays for me at night--
A gift of broken promises to count by candle-light.

One is for the tried friend who raised me when I fell--
A gift of weakling's tinsel oaths that strew the path to hell.

And one is for the true love--the heaviest of all--
That holds the pieces of a faith a careless hand let fall.

Black Sheep, Black Sheep,
Have you ought to say?
A word to each, my Master,
Ere I go my way.

A word unto my mother to bid her think o' me
Only as a little lad playing at her knee.

A word unto my tried friend to bid him see again
Two laughing lads in Springtime a-racing down the glen.

A word unto my true love--a single word--to pray
If one day I cross her path to turn her eyes away.


Scheme Abcb dd ee ff Agcg hh ii gg
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111 11101 111110 111 111010111111 01110100111101 111011111111 0111101110111 0111011010011 11010101010111 1111 11111 0111110 11111 0110110110111 101010110101 0110111111101 110101010101 0110111010111 1111101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 808
Words 172
Sentences 10
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 4, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Theodosia Garrison

also known as: Theodosia Pickering Garrison; Mrs. Frederic Faulks. Worked on the staff of Life Magazine; helped to organize the 250th Anniversary of the City of Newark, NJ (she was also born in Newark, NJ); resided in New Jersey. Was a houseguest of the famed poet E. Wilcox; made the Who's Who 1914 list. Information is difficult to collect on this poet. More will be posted at a later date. more…

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