Analysis of That 30 U.S. On The Wall



A man that's spent years knocking round "out in front"
Has most usually had lots of pals--
He's mixed up with pardners at various times
And he's had his affairs with the gals.
Now, a pardner's peculiar in lots of his ways
And he'll ditch you for various reasons,
And a gal never knows straight up from twice
And her mind seems to change with the seasons.

I've been in on good ground with pardners I've staked
And I thought they were square, till I found
They were trying to cross me, the miserable pups,
And whipsaw me out of my ground.
I've had a few pards that would stand the hard grind
And they'd stick through hard luck night and day;
They were all you could ask while you rustled for grub,
But they blew up when you uncovered the "pay."

Way back in the "eighties" when I'm just a kid,
I crossed up with a breed gal I'd met
One winter at Circle; she cleaned me that year
And skipped out with all she could get.
I've fallen for females in half of the camps
That's spread over this country up here,
But "square guys" or "pretzels" I couldn't get by
And none of them stuck for a year.

I got kind of discouraged and quit the she sex
And figgered I'd just herd with males,
But it don't make no difference, I guess that I'm wrong,
'Cause there's always the parting of trails.
I've had lots of dogs, but a dog always dies,
Or else the poor devil gets killed.
When you like 'em and lose 'em, their loss leaves a hole
That seems for a time can't be filled.

So pardners and females and dogs is taboo
And I know, 'cause I've fussed with 'em all.
There's only one pal that I know is true blue
And it's that Thirty U.S. on the wall.
She's stood by my shoulder and stopped a brown bear
And she keeps the cache full in the Fall;
She's got the one talk that a claim jumper knows
And she craves no attention at all.

I'm getting old now, and some sot in my ways,
And I don't loosen up like I did.
I'm slower to make friends and slower to trust
Than I used to be when I'm a kid.
So it's good-by to females and good-by to dogs,
And good-by to pardners and all,
For the only one pal that I find I can trust
Is that Thirty U.S. on the wall.


Scheme XAXABCXC XDXDXEXE FGHGXXXH XIXIXJXJ KLKLXLXL BFMFXLML
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101101 1110001111 1111111001 011101101 10101001111 0111110010 0011011111 0011111010 1101111111 011101111 1010111010001 0111111 11011111011 011111101 10111111111 11111101001 11001011101 111101111 11011011111 01111111 1101101101 111011011 11111011011 01111101 111101001011 0111111 1111110011111 11101011 1111110111 11011011 111101111101 11101111 110101101 011111111 11011111111 011101101 11111001011 011011001 11011101101 011101011 11011011011 011101111 11011101011 111111101 11111101111 0111101 101011111111 11101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,091
Words 431
Sentences 19
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 8
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 268
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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