Analysis of An Elegiac Ode.



He chastens us as nations and as men,
He smites us sore until our pride doth yield,
And hence our heroes, each with hearts for ten,
Were vanquished in the field;

And stand to-day beneath our Southern sun
O'erthrown in battle and despoiled of hope,
Their drums all silent and their cause undone,
And they all left to grope

In darkness till God's own appointed time
In His own manner passeth fully by.
Our Penance this. His Parable sublime
Means we must learn to die.

Not as our soldiers died beneath their flags,
Not as in tumult and in blood they fell,
When from their columns, clad in homely rags,
Rose the Confederate yell.

Not as they died, though never mortal men
Since Tubal Cain first forged his cruel blade
Fought as they fought, nor ever shall agen
Such Leader be obeyed!

No, not as died our knightly, soldier dead,
Though they, I trust, have found above surcease
For all life's troubles, but on Christian bed
Should we depart in peace,

Falling asleep like those whose gentle deeds
Are governed through time's passions and its strife,
So justly that we might erect new creeds
From each well ordered life,

Whose saintly lessons are so framed that we
May learn that pain is but a text sublime,
Teaching us how to learn at Sorrow's knee
To value things of time.

Thus thinking o'er life's promise-breaking dreams,
Its lights and shadows made of hopes and fears,
I say that Death is kinder than he seems,
And not the King of Tears.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH AIAI JGJX KLKL MEME NXNX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (89%)
Metre 111110011 11110110111 01101011111 010001 01110110101 10100111 1111001101 011111 0101110101 011101101 10101110001 111111 11101010111 1101000111 1111010101 1001001 1111110101 1101111101 111111011 110101 11111010101 111111011 1111011101 110101 1001111101 1101110011 1101110111 111101 1101011111 1111110101 101111111 110111 11010110101 110111101 1111110111 010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,423
Words 267
Sentences 7
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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James Barron Hope

James Barron Hope was born March 23, 1829 at his maternal grandfather’s home in Hampton, Virginia. more…

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