Analysis of Annan Water



"Annan Water's wading deep,
And my love Annie's wondrous bonny;
I will keep my tryst to-night,
And win the heart o' lovely Annie."

He's loupen on his bonny grey,
He rade the right gate and the ready',
For a' the storm he wadna stay,
For seeking o' his bonny lady.

And he has ridden o'er field and fell,
Through muir and moss, and stones and mire;
His spurs o' steel were sair to bide,
And frae her four feet flew the fire.

"My bonny grey, noo play your part!
Gin ye be the steed that wins my dearie,
Wi' corn and hay ye'se be fed for aye,
And never spur sail mak' you wearie."

The grey was a mare, and a right gude mare:
But when she wan the Annan Water,
She couldna hae found the ford that night
Had a thousand merks been wadded at her.

"O boatman, boatman, put off your boat,
Put off your boat for gouden money!"
But for a' the goud in fair Scotland,
He dared na tak' him through to Annie.

"O I was sworn sae late yestreen,
Not by a single aith, but mony.
I'll cross the drumly stream to-night,
Or never could I face my honey."

The side was stey, and the bottom deep,
Frae bank to brae the water pouring;
The bonny grey mare she swat for fear,
For she heard the water-kelpy roaring.

He spurred her forth into the flood,
I wot she swam both strong and steady;
But the stream was broad, her strength did fail,
And he never saw his bonny lady.

O wae betide the frush saugh wand!
And wae betide the bush of brier!
That bent and brake into his hand,
When strength of man and horse did tire.

And wae betide ye, Annan Water!
This night ye are a drumly river;
But over thee we'll build a brig,
That ye nae mair true love may sever.


Scheme ABCB DBDB XXXE XDXD XECE XBXB BBCB AFXF XBXB XEXE EEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (73%)
Metre 1010101 01111010 1111111 010111010 1111101 110110010 1001111 110111010 0111010101 11010101 11110111 010111010 11011111 111011111 1101111111 01011111 0110100111 111101010 11110111 1010111010 110101111 11111110 110010110 111111110 1111111 110101110 1101111 110111110 011100101 111101010 010111111 111010110 11010101 111111010 101110111 0110111010 11010111 010101110 11010111 111101110 010111010 11110110 11011101 111111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,612
Words 335
Sentences 17
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on August 03, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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George Wharton Edwards

George Wharton Edwards was an American impressionist painter and illustrator, and the author of several books of travel and historical subjects. more…

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