Analysis of A burp



At the other end of the street
There is a car and someone is blowing its horn.

Green slime-worms  crawling in and out from under and over it.
What happened?

Street fissures from volcanic eruption, open smoke, green fumes with glowing embers all around the car.
Who are they?

Two lovers thought to enfold
Trapped by earth's burp and imprisoned
In their embrace.
Douglas Noel


Scheme XX XA XX XAXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 10101101 11010111011 111100011100101 110 110101010101111101010101 111 1101101 11110010 0101 1001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 382
Words 67
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 75
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by dougnoel on July 27, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Douglas Noel

Douglas is a published poet who have been accorded several awards for his poetry. He is a former teacher of 40 years the last 13 of which focused on teaching middle school children to write especially using various poetic forms. more…

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