Analysis of The Ones Between Us



I'd know you if I saw you,
Although we've never met.
I see the ones between us,
With more to come, I'll bet!

Love is such a dismal dance
Without you in my arms.
I date the ones between us,
Whilst dreaming of your charms!

Each day I hope I'll find you,
But so far, not so good.
I meet the ones between us,
And not you, like I should!

I know that you are out there,
And closer every day.
Right now the ones between us
Are getting in the way!

I'd really love to meet you,
But when will that day be?
It seems the ones between us
Are hiding you from me!

True love is all I ask for;
To share my life with you.
Some day the ones between us
Will disappear from view!

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2020


Scheme ABCB XDCD AECE XFCF AGCG XACA F
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 11101 1101011 111111 1110101 011011 1101011 110111 1111111 111111 1101011 011111 1111111 0101001 1101011 110001 1101111 111111 1101011 110111 1111111 111111 1101011 10111 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 686
Words 144
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 74
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 21, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Robert Haigh

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