Analysis of Grandma's House



I loved to go to grandma's house
When I was very small.
Those big old empty rooms upstairs
Always seemed so tall.
I'd play up there without a care;
With just one chair, that's all.

Imagination was my friend;
I'd gladly play alone.
I'd be a pirate captain, or
A king upon a throne.
Then I'd be a wizard, who
Would turn things into stone!

My mother's voice would end my play,
Calling from below.
I'd grumble and complain out loud,
But then I'd slowly go
Down into the furnished rooms
With coal fires, all aglow.

Lemonade and chocolate cake
Would suddenly appear.
Grandma, with  a smile, would say,
"Here you are, my dear!"
I'd smile right back and thank her,
Then make it disappear!

Soon it would be time to leave,
And we would kiss goodbye.
Grandma would stand by the door,
A tear within her eye.
I'd turn and wave, and she'd wave back,
Then give a gentle sigh.

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2017


Scheme XAXAXA XBCBXB DEXEXE XFDFXF XGCGXG D
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 111101 11110101 1111 11110101 111111 0010111 110101 11010101 010101 1110101 111011 11011111 10101 11000111 111101 1010101 1110101 1010101 110001 1010111 11111 1111010 11101 1111111 01111 1011101 010101 11010111 110101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 881
Words 169
Sentences 15
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 1
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 19, 2020

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Robert Haigh

Robert Haigh is an amateur English poet, Musician and photographer. more…

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