Analysis of A million miles from now



Breathing in.  Porously. Bioluminosity.
Plasma and sparks.  Dare to befriend the unseen.
O' light in the dark. Purple impossible-- dreaming
  wake. Coded with cosmic electricity.
Now that i feel what i could not see before.
Slaying the real. It isn't the face you adore,
I tried.  Conscience died. Wings no longer can take flight.
Spiraling up. Out in the vaccuous night.
Enter the void.  Surrounded, immaculate sight.

"To live--to die-- to feel... alive?"

Forgot to mention my thrilling impressions.
Those without which i'm a fool with no rhyme.
All best intentions and plasma inventions.
I melt through the floor like a moment in time.
A moment in time.
A moment in time.

Break from tradition.  NO DIVINE INTERVENTION.
I found my connection.  Yes, that is my crime.
No lazy conventions nor' lack of dimension.
You can hear my dissention. I challenge the tide.

A phantom, white, with ears stretched wide,
hops quite elegantly,
gaining stride.
Thought it was a statue, grinning. Nein
Ivory shoal as old as time...

Tick tock. Tick tock. Tick tock.
"Hurry, up and, then wait.
Tick tock. Tick tock. Tick tock.
Racing- for the-- red light, red light."

"Human kind,
is NOT so kind.
Spiral down.
Burning eyez..."

Spiral out of this world.
Better places to be.
I might not see it all.
but i'll take back the pieces of me.

"Follow me.  Through the fire. We will see---
More than-- false desire.
Follow me. Through the fire. You will see.
More than-- false desire.  False desire."

"We've come to slay the real.
And break your precious seals.
The secret is revealed..."

"We're the magick and the sight.
Made of logic and a psyche.
Weary traveler, bow your head.
Resting on ultraviolet pillars..."

"When nothing seems to work,
an'  rain is coming down.
I become a crystalline serenade.
The frequency surrounds me..."

(Voice fading as if descending.)

Tick tock. Tick tock. Tick tock.
"Hurry, up and, then wait.
Tick tock. Tick tock. Tick tock.
Racing- for the-- red light, red light."
Fal-ling down...
Makes- no-- sound...

"Follow me.  Through the fire. We will see---
More than-- false desire.
Follow me. Through the fire. You will see.
More than-- false desire.  False desire."

"Just a light in the dark that we can't see,
or get away from.
Still we cling to the eyes of a belief,
that hasn't brought us, to one conclusion..
Try i might play the fool but i know me.
In the black sun.  Burning hot. Glowing on as the fallout.
All this division, is the illusion."

Through the door.
Shrinking more.
Looking in.  Falling through you.
A million miles from now.
A million miles from now.
A million miles from now.

Say the words.  "don't disturb."
So unsure.  All is a blur.
A million miles from now.

Illusions fade.
Break away.
Twisting through.
All is so new.
A million miles from now.
A million miles from now.
A million miles from now.

And theres just one answer for me.
Sirens of sheer frequency.
Haunting the realms of my dreams.
Screaming to set my soul free.
A million miles from now.

"And there's a world hidden from our view.
Tried to share but now i'm fading out of tune.
Can we catch the dragons tail,
and ride it straight on through the veil?
Never feared that much for state or sanity.
Found my friend in simple zen and energy.
Not to speak over the heads,
of the walking living dead...


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Poetic Form
Metre 10011 10011101001 1100110010010 1101100100 11111111101 100111001101 111011110111 100110011 100101001001 11111101 01110110010 1011101111 11010010010 11101101001 01001 01001 11010101010 11101011111 110010111010 1111111001 01011111 111000 101 11101101 10011111 111111 101011 111111 10101111 101 1111 101 101 101111 101011 111111 111101011 1011010111 111010 1011010111 1110101010 111101 011101 010101 101001 11100010 10100111 101010010 110111 111101 10101001 0100011 11011010 111111 101011 111111 10101111 111 111 1011010111 111010 1011010111 1110101010 1010011111 11011 1111011001 1101111010 1111011111 0011101101101 1101010010 101 101 1001011 010111 010111 010111 101101 1011101 010111 0101 101 101 1111 010111 010111 010111 01111011 1011100 1001111 1011111 010111 0101101101 11111110111 1110101 01111101 10111111100 11101010100 1111001 1010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,300
Words 600
Sentences 124
Stanzas 21
Stanza Lengths 9, 1, 6, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3, 4, 4, 1, 6, 4, 7, 6, 3, 7, 5, 8
Lines Amount 99
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted by Amarantine on April 28, 2020

Modified on March 31, 2023

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