Analysis of For Willa & Josh



On behalf of the
Holness mob,
I’d like to welcome you one and all,
And if you’ve never been here before,
Hehehe,
Just sit back, relax, because your gonna have a ball.
Well you finally bloody did it Josh,
you got Willa to say yes.
Although how you finally did it
Is really anybody’s guess.
Maybe it was always the way
you let the Lovelight in your heart shine,
Or maybe it was how you passed her tests
Time after time after time.
I’m just glad to be here with everyone today
Celebrating you and your new Mrs Lay.
Some thought she’d never do it,
being the strong and independent one.
She thought she’d lose her individuality,
and that it would take away all the fun.
But she knows now that,that’s just not true,
She can still be herself and have a good time
but  knowing You will be there,
To hold back her  hair as she’s  having a spew.
She knows your heart is strong and true
and that always will you be there
and never will she be alone
For she shall always have you
With whom she can share.
Then when the night is all dark
and your troubles abound
Take comfort in each other
and the love that you have found.
Then not before long
There will be
the pitter patter
Of tiny feet.
Oops I’ve done it now
Poor Willa has gone as white as a sheet.
Now on that note
I’ll leave you
and let Willa catch her breath
 before she can disintegrate me,
with her x-ray eyes of death.
There is one more thing
I do have to say,
Before I go run
N hide far away.
May the sun shine upon you
Wherever you may be.
May you always be this happy
Untroubled and carefree
May you always keep this love
So bright and so strong
It’s what will save and keep you going
When everything feels wrong
May you always hold tight,
Each to the other
And never forget
That’s where you belong.
May My Gods
And your God
Bring you Blessings
without measure
And fill your lives with
Loving memories
That always you can treasure.
Blessed Be
Jodes
15/5/2019


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (30%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 10110 101 111101101 011101101 1 1110101110101 1110010111 1110111 11110011 11011 1011101 11010111 1101111101 1101101 11111111001 1001011101 1111011 100100101 11110000100 0111101101 11111111 11110101011 1101111 11101111001 11111101 0111111 01011101 111111 11111 1101111 011001 1100110 0011111 11011 111 0110 1101 11111 1101111101 1111 111 0110101 01110101 1011111 11111 11111 01111 11101 1011011 010111 1111110 01001 111111 11011 111101110 11011 11111 11010 01001 11101 111 011 1110 0110 01111 10100 111110 11 1 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,901
Words 370
Sentences 18
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 70
Lines Amount 70
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,489
Words per stanza (avg) 372
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Submitted by Jodes on April 09, 2020

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:51 min read
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