Analysis of Lost in you



Every time I lose myself, gazing in your eyes, they are the labyrinth I cannot escape, nor would I want to try. Every time I lose myself, listening to your voice, like the sweetest music, it holds my mind in poise. Every time I lose myself, thinking about you, you are the candle to my flame that burns my soul all through

Mere words cannot describe the beauty you posesss, still I try to write them down, knowing I must confess. You preach, you teach, with unnerving ease while I am silently in awe, for what else can one man do when it is my heart you draw. Your razor wit, that you have let, me play upon, time and time again. when you see fit, to share with me, the stories of the life you entertain.

To my knowledge, there could be no solace, if I had never learned of your existence and that is also why I regret every day we are still at a distance. For if I were to find myself closer to your presence, maybe then my words could better do you justice, as to describe your essence and I could further lose myself without any resistance


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Characters 1,040
Words 202
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 271
Words per line (avg) 67
Letters per stanza (avg) 271
Words per stanza (avg) 67
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Submitted by Barty on December 10, 2019

Modified on March 14, 2023

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