Analysis of You Were Like That Omnipresent God In My Life



You were like that crimson rose in my life; which seldom lost its fragrance; inundating the atmosphere with its heavenly smell,

You were like that rain cloud in my life; which incessantly showered rain; nourishing the earth profoundly with its caress,

You were like that concrete wall in my life; which didn't break under the most onerous of load; remained unperturbed under the most deafening of dynamite explosion,

You were like that gigantic ocean in my life; which never reduced its level; swirled magnificently in the ravishing breeze,

You were like that foliated tree in my life; which never shed a single leaf; gave a perennial supply of succulent fruit,

You were like that sea blue nightingale in my life; which unrelentingly chirped notes of mesmerizing music,

You were like that sacrosanct cow in my life; which yielded a salubrious supply of immaculate milk,

You were like that twinkling star in my life; which radiated for indefatigable hours; was first to appear in the sky,

You were like that exquisite fountain ink in my life; which kept on embossing intricate lines of calligraphy; granting overwhelming empathy to words,

You were like that inflated balloon in my life; which soared abreast the kingly eagles in proximity of the satiny clouds; didn't loose its balance and stoicism even in the most turbulent of storm,

You were like that colossal whale in my life; which left millions in a stupor after witnessing its form; ruled the ocean for centuries immemorial,

You were like that impeccable color in my life; which didn't develop an iota of blemish; even when ruthlessly dipped in the most acrid of paint,

You were like that blade of grass in my life; which remained as green as ever; even when its counterparts withered under the acrimonious tyranny of the sun,
You were like that tower clock in my life; whose needles never stumbled and stopped; despite of the cells being exhausted,

You were like that pack of soft cards in my life; which always seemed to incredibly win,

You were like that wonderful lane in my life; which never seemed to end; transforming mundane life into ebullient spirit of adventure,

You were like that blissful dream in my life; which catapulted me to unprecedented heights of jubilation,

You were like that scarlet blood circulating through my body; which reinvigorated my heart and dreary bones; every unleashing minute,

You were like that celestial fairy in my life; circumventing me with waves of enchantment and robust energy,

And you were like that omnipresent god in my life; whom we christen by different names; but in the end bow our heads low under his supreme grace.


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Characters 2,625
Words 444
Sentences 1
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 106
Words per line (avg) 22
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by nikhilparekh on October 15, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nikhil Parekh

Nikhil Parekh , ( born August 27 ; 1977 ) from Ahmedabad , India - is a Love Poet and 10 time National Record holder for his Poetry with the Limca Book of Records India , which is India's Best Book of Records , also Ranked 2nd in the World officially to Guinness Book of World Records . He is an author of - ' LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY ' , which has a Print Length of 5254 pages on the Amazon Kindle . The Poet's style of Poetry / literature is unique and has never ever been written before or experimented on the mortal planet by any mortal . Though his Poetry / literature is normal and natural . 10 Different National Records held by Parekh with the Limca Book of Records India are for - (1) Being the First Indian Poet to be published / featured in McGill English Dictionary of Rhyme which is the World's Number 1 English Rhyming Dictionary - for his poem: Come Lets Embrace our New Religion (2) Being the First Indian Poet to have won Poet of the Year Award at the Canadian Federation of Poets which is Canada's National Poetry Body endorsed by Governor General of Canada (3) Being the First Indian Poet to be published in a Commonwealth Newsletter for his poem on AIDS which is 'Aids doesn't kill. Your Attitude kills (4) Being the First Indian Poet to win an EPPIE award for best poetry e-book (5) Writing the most number of letters to and receiving the most number of replies from World Leaders and World Organizations (6) Being the First Indian Poet to be Goodwill Ambassador to the International Goodwill Treaty for World Peace - GoodwillTreaty.org (7) Being the First Indian Poet whose Poems have been made into Films at Youtube.com - The World's largest video sharing website (8) Being the 1st Indian Poet to be featured for his Poetry Book - 'Love versus Terrorism- Poems on Anti Terror, Peace' , at Wattpad.com - The World's most popular ebook community and largest website for reading books on mobile phones (9) Being the first Indian Poet whose video reciting a Poem on Nelson Mandela , has been placed at the official website of the Government of South Africa (10) Having authored LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY - which is of Print Length 5254 pages and currently has approximately 1.15 million words , financially selling in the Amazon.com Kindle Store United States at - http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003Y8XLKQ . The Indian Poet has written thousands of varied poems on - God , Peace , Love , Anti Terrorism , Friendship , Life , Death , Environment, Wildlife , Mother , Father , Children , Parenthood , Humanity , Social Cause , Women empowerment , Poverty , Lovers , Brotherhood . His Books and Poems have had millions of viewers and downloads on the Internet . Parekh is an author of 47 varied Books which include - 1 God ( volume 1 to volume 4 ) , The Womb ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , Love Versus Terrorism ( Part 1 to Part 2 ) , You die; I die - Love Poems ( Part 1 to Part 16 ) , Life = Death ( volume 1 to volume 10 ), The Power of Black ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , If you cut a tree; you cut your own mother , Hide and Seek ( part 1 to part 8 ) , Longest Poem written by Nikhil Parekh - Only as Life . These Books comprise of nearly a 7000 pages of his Poetry in their entirety . The Poet's Poetry has had the patronization of several versatile World Leaders including the Queen of England . Visit http://nikhilparekh.net ; the webpage . more…

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