Analysis of United Human kind



The sweat that flowed when you killed; was like the orphaned wings of a parasitic leech; left to devastate on its own in this fathomless Universe,

The sweat that flowed when you lied; was like a lifeless skeleton suspended in non-existent air; pulverizing to inconspicuous ash; at the tiniest insinuation of drifting wind,

The sweat that flowed when you hated; was like a crocodile slithering disastrously; without the most minuscule droplet of water; in the heart of the insurmountably sweltering deserts,

The sweat that flowed when you devilishly conspired; was like grandiloquently embellished; bereft of a single tangible soul,

The sweat that flowed when you lambasted your parents; was like a dog opening its mouth an infinite times; and yet not able to poignantly bark,

The sweat that flowed when you betrayed; was like a billion scorpions stinging a new born infant; strangulating him to death; even before he was alive,

The sweat that flowed when you condemned mankind; was like the satanic tremor of a ghastly earthquake; metamorphosing your visage to a pack of frigidly burnt cards,

The sweat that flowed when you disrupted harmony; was like a horrendously blind man; walking on the summit of the Himalayas,

The sweat that flowed when you brutally hijacked; was like a ludicrous scarecrow; melting to blend with soil; at the most obsolete of Sunshine,

The sweat that flowed when you indiscriminately whipped; was like a colossal juggernaut of stinking lizard; dancing in your stomach after your afternoon meal,

The sweat that flowed when you rebelled Almighty Lord; was like an infinitesimal mosquito surrendering; before its master even wept,

The sweat that flowed when you abusively tyrannized; was like the worst nightmare of your existence; transforming each instant of your destiny into a countless breaths without life,

The sweat that flowed when you maliciously stabbed; was like a tree on soil since centuries unprecedented; without the most diminutive of thorn or voluptuous
leaf,

The sweat that flowed when you poisoned children; was like a miserably freezing avalanche of ice; not melting even under the most austerely brilliant of Sunshine,

The sweat that flowed when you adulterated blissful society; was like an docile ant; merrily forcing the ferocious panther; to have the last run of its life,

The sweat that flowed when you slit the innocent; was like a dungeon of uncouth daggers; indefatigably lingering in the absolute center of your mouth,

The sweat that flowed when you ridiculed the celestially elderly; was like an haggardly pale stone; being kicked; tossed; kidded and decimated by all fraternity of living kind,

The sweat that flowed when you snatched happiness; was like pathetically rotting carrion; being relentlessly ripped apart by a hostile battalion of vultures and wandering wolves,

While the sweat that flowed when you loved and lived life; was like the divine taking birth as man; immortalizing this planet; with the essence of united human kind.


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Submitted by nikhilparekh on October 14, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nikhil Parekh

Nikhil Parekh , ( born August 27 ; 1977 ) from Ahmedabad , India - is a Love Poet and 10 time National Record holder for his Poetry with the Limca Book of Records India , which is India's Best Book of Records , also Ranked 2nd in the World officially to Guinness Book of World Records . He is an author of - ' LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY ' , which has a Print Length of 5254 pages on the Amazon Kindle . The Poet's style of Poetry / literature is unique and has never ever been written before or experimented on the mortal planet by any mortal . Though his Poetry / literature is normal and natural . 10 Different National Records held by Parekh with the Limca Book of Records India are for - (1) Being the First Indian Poet to be published / featured in McGill English Dictionary of Rhyme which is the World's Number 1 English Rhyming Dictionary - for his poem: Come Lets Embrace our New Religion (2) Being the First Indian Poet to have won Poet of the Year Award at the Canadian Federation of Poets which is Canada's National Poetry Body endorsed by Governor General of Canada (3) Being the First Indian Poet to be published in a Commonwealth Newsletter for his poem on AIDS which is 'Aids doesn't kill. Your Attitude kills (4) Being the First Indian Poet to win an EPPIE award for best poetry e-book (5) Writing the most number of letters to and receiving the most number of replies from World Leaders and World Organizations (6) Being the First Indian Poet to be Goodwill Ambassador to the International Goodwill Treaty for World Peace - GoodwillTreaty.org (7) Being the First Indian Poet whose Poems have been made into Films at Youtube.com - The World's largest video sharing website (8) Being the 1st Indian Poet to be featured for his Poetry Book - 'Love versus Terrorism- Poems on Anti Terror, Peace' , at Wattpad.com - The World's most popular ebook community and largest website for reading books on mobile phones (9) Being the first Indian Poet whose video reciting a Poem on Nelson Mandela , has been placed at the official website of the Government of South Africa (10) Having authored LONGEST BOOK written by a mortal - COLLECTED POETRY - which is of Print Length 5254 pages and currently has approximately 1.15 million words , financially selling in the Amazon.com Kindle Store United States at - http://www.amazon.com/dp/B003Y8XLKQ . The Indian Poet has written thousands of varied poems on - God , Peace , Love , Anti Terrorism , Friendship , Life , Death , Environment, Wildlife , Mother , Father , Children , Parenthood , Humanity , Social Cause , Women empowerment , Poverty , Lovers , Brotherhood . His Books and Poems have had millions of viewers and downloads on the Internet . Parekh is an author of 47 varied Books which include - 1 God ( volume 1 to volume 4 ) , The Womb ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , Love Versus Terrorism ( Part 1 to Part 2 ) , You die; I die - Love Poems ( Part 1 to Part 16 ) , Life = Death ( volume 1 to volume 10 ), The Power of Black ( volume 1 to volume 2 ) , If you cut a tree; you cut your own mother , Hide and Seek ( part 1 to part 8 ) , Longest Poem written by Nikhil Parekh - Only as Life . These Books comprise of nearly a 7000 pages of his Poetry in their entirety . The Poet's Poetry has had the patronization of several versatile World Leaders including the Queen of England . Visit http://nikhilparekh.net ; the webpage . more…

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