Analysis of An Aboriginal Mothers's Lament



An Aboriginal Mother’s Lament
Charles Harpur

[About the year 1842 a party of stockmen, several of whom were afterwards hanged for the crime, made a wholesale slaughter of a small tribe of defenceless blacks; one woman only, with her infant, escaped from the murderers.]   

Still farther would I fly, my child,
   To make thee safer yet,
From the unsparing white man,
   With his dread hand murder-wet!
I’ll bear thee on as I have borne
   With stealthy steps wind-fleet,
But the dark night shrouds the forest,
   And thorns are in my feet.
       O moan not! I would give this braid—
           Thy father’s gift to me—
       But for a single palmful
           Of water now for thee.

Ah! Spring not to his name—no more
   To glad us may he come!
He is smouldering into ashes
   Beneath the blasted gum!
All charred and blasted by the fire
   The white man kindled there,
And fed with our slaughtered kindred
   Till heaven-high went its glare!

O moan not! I would give this braid—
           Thy father’s gift to me—
       For but a single palmful
           Of water now for thee.

And but for thee, I would their fire
   Had eaten me as fast!
Hark! Hark! I hear his death-cry
   Yet lengthening up the blast!
But no—when that we should fly,
   On the roaring pyre flung bleeding—
I saw thy father die!

O moan not! I would give this braid—
           Thy father’s gift to me—
       For but a single palmful
           Of water now for thee.

No more shall his loud tomahawk
   Be plied to win our cheer,
Or the shining fish-pools darken
   Beneath his shadowing spear;
The fading tracks of his fleet foot
   Shall guide not as before,
And the mountain-spirits mimic
   His hunting call no more!

O moan not! I would give this braid—
           Thy father’s gift to me—
       For but a single palmful
           Of water now for thee.  


Scheme xa x xbxbxcxcDEfE agxgaaxa DEFE ahahfxx DEFE xaxaxaxa DEFE
Poetic Form Etheree  (32%)
Metre 101001001 11 0101010111011010011011011010111111101010100110100 11011111 111101 1001011 1111101 11111111 110111 10111010 011011 11111111 110111 110101 110111 11111111 111111 1110110 010101 110101010 011101 011101010 1101111 11111111 110111 110101 110111 011111110 110111 1111111 1100101 1111111 101010110 111101 11111111 110111 110101 110111 1111110 1111101 10101110 0111001 01011111 111101 00101010 110111 11111111 110111 110101 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,981
Words 316
Sentences 22
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 12, 8, 4, 7, 4, 8, 4
Lines Amount 50
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 144
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 19, 2023

1:34 min read
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Charles Harpur

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