Analysis of Choose love... Choose me...



I love you more than words can say .
    Thoughts of you and your craziness fill my mind everyday .
    I had a feeling when we first hooked up that you'd leave me lost and broken.
    But as the days turned to months I realized you are worth the risk.. not even jokin.
    You've brought my emotions on a fast paced surreal roller coaster ride.
    You are my one and only and I want to be yours... But I guess that's for you to decide .
    Please make up your mind quickly, the anticipation is more than I can bare.
    I pray you choose love and our lives and happiness we will share.
    I love you my sexy man but if your feelings you cannot return.
    My heart will be crushed... My hopes all crash and burn .
    If the truth is that you want me to let you be...
    Then I'll try my hardest to reign in my feelings and set you free


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFF
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 11101100111101 110101111111111010 1101111110111011101 11101010110110101 111101001111111111111 111111000010111111 1111101010100111 11111011111011001 11111111101 101111111111 1111101101100111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 830
Words 160
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 608
Words per stanza (avg) 164
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Submitted on July 05, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Shelly Johnson

Heartbroken for the last time. 35 years I've been on the planet.. gifted with 5 beautiful daughters, although Jesus called one home last year after only 15 years here with me.. born and raised in Florida . more…

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