Analysis of Eternity's Twin



As of late,
  I have developed a new best friend

It’s my younger self coming
  to visit my end

I look in his face,
  and I see a new truth

I look in his face,
  and I see more than youth

Now more like my father,
  I more like his son

The beginning he carries,
  from whose ending I run

He tells me he’s followed,
  but I never looked back

Always looking beyond,
  what my fear could attack

He approaches me close,
  but we’re never to touch

The distance between us,
  life’s meaning as such

For most of my days
  I planned dying alone

But now in his presence,
  every memory reshown

He points to my heart,
  as his eyes fly within

His vision, my vision
  —eternity’s twin

(Villanova Pennsylvania: May, 2019)


Scheme xa xa Bc Bc xd xd xe xe xf xf xx xd xg dg x
Poetic Form
Metre 111 110100111 1110110 11011 11011 011011 11011 011111 111110 11111 0010110 111011 111110 111011 11001 111101 101011 101011 010011 11011 11111 111001 110110 1001001 11111 111101 110110 11 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 691
Words 132
Sentences 1
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on May 04, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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