Analysis of Biscooti Love



Memory is… images of a prepubescent boy cycling home,
Parag milk packets in one of his arms,
feeding biscuits to a stray gaggle of brown dogs, wagging their shins.

Large half-moon eyes, kind salivating tongue,
his smile showed no cookie-crescent as he fed them all;
he was my first love.

More than the girls, the calves and canines knew his way home,
this small-towner of a bygone Bhaarat who found humans in animals,
he grew hunger in me.

Now in this morphing, super-quick India, his animals are holographic.
His love fades cookie-slim into the sun of many states, tastes, time zones.
He has not one trail from work to home, but ten homes.

He, the colour of chocolate, almond-abdomened,
he found love in many cities,
technology-girls,
animals in liberated women,
who fed off his glucose, milk, sugar, marmalade;
they never grew thin.

Over the trail of his virgin-white honey, the scent of shudh desi,
Old world in new crackling wrapping,
always with a 30% improved marking.

Bearing the saccharine of my bites and goosebumps,
he now breaks under my neurotic granular breath.
chai mein dubha hua - tea-dunked, wafer-thin, milk crux-ed.

My Pickwick, Marie, Parle G, Tiger,
Oreo, Bourbon, mall-shelved Belgian,
online baked-and-ordered
same old-same new,
premium cream-crunched love.


Scheme ABB XXC AXD XXX EXXFEX DGG BXE XFEXC
Poetic Form
Metre 100110010111001 0111001111 1010101101111011 111111001 1111101011111 11111 110101011111 1110101111100100 111001 1011010110011001010 11110101011101111 111111111111 101110101 11101010 01001 100010010 1111111010 11011 10011110110011110 11011010 1100110 1001011101 1111010101001 1111011101111 11011110 100101110 11010 1111 100111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,274
Words 209
Sentences 11
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 6, 3, 3, 5
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 126
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by Rochelle Potkar on April 17, 2019

Modified on March 14, 2023

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