Analysis of Unearthed



I slip into the night's armor
finding vacant folds
to rest the senses in over drive,

make for due presence
 a comfort zone
 for heart's on the fence
 needing this space alone.

Meditation with no loud
ticks addressing its passing is cleared.

And with this silent peace covering
any chill that could enter
somehow, will not be forsaken.  

What really matters this testament
to life
not to be swept away and forgotten.

The stars in concerto at arm's length
keep eternal, keep night light running.


Scheme AXX XBXB XX CAD XXD XC
Poetic Form
Metre 11010110 10101 110100101 11110 0101 11101 101101 010111 101011011 011101100 1011110 1111010 110101100 11 1111010010 010010111 101011110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 479
Words 85
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 2, 3, 3, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 66
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted on March 09, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Patricia Fritsche

Pursued my passion for composition, exploring of mind and emotions and bringing light, somehow to our earth in transition needing help and change. From the seventies till now one can see its outcome. Love being a part of the writing community in whatever degree. more…

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