Analysis of Beyond Her Shield



Using me as a weapon
  and not a shield

The Muse would
  parry and thrust

Attacking with a message
  that wouldn’t yield

She prowled my light hours
  in disgust

The sword of my fathers
  hers by right

To ensure
  tonight’s salvation

Collapsing the moment
  reversing my sight

Each cut
  a revelation

All time was dead
  its hours uncast

As she thundered out a
  mystery

Her lightning destroying
  all futures past

My soul
  —in forced recovery

(Villanova Pennsylvania: April, 2015)


Scheme AB XC XB DC DE XA XE XA XB XF XX XF X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (56%)
Metre 1011010 0101 011 1001 0101010 111 111110 001 011110 011 101 1010 010010 01011 11 0010 1111 1101 111010 100 010010 1101 11 01010 01001010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 464
Words 79
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 21, 2019

Modified on March 12, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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