Analysis of As You Fly



I asked you to remain my student
But you wanted to teach
The balance between us changing
Our past out of reach
I gave what I could to your memory
And you borrowed the rest
Repayment to be due on arrival
  —as you fly from the nest

(Villanova Pennsylvania- January, 2019)


Scheme XAXABCXC B
Poetic Form
Metre 111101110 111011 01001110 101111 1111111100 01101 0101111010 111101 010010100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 264
Words 51
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on January 19, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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