Analysis of R.I.P. ": Feddie Mercury"



Mercury remember me from sea to shining sea
through pleasant plains let me be the first to explain,
Freddie, you blazing dance was magnificent out of coincident
trading from trapper Joe how should we spare to let everyone know
up to your table sleeve a cause nor need...,
Another one bites the dust & Bohemian Rap..,
working so hard can give anyone a heart attack
trapped, filled with every motive to attract
care for the living stand still & forgiven

perhaps you just needed your space so far away from us
a pleasant visit to a Tribe called Quest
carefree from the rest,
at each junction their were guns from Pressure
be an example for to be unleashed sought after to handle

yet you won't see him in the rocking chair
building bridges taking numbers to the absurd
Freddie is all part of the mystery figure out things up your tender sleeve
mass hysteria...
Mercury summoned a child to bleed on the side due we please
an innocent man reclined from a far in tan

leave all the bullshit out the window
the chance to remove its steak called by fate
let it go bust up the beat to promote its tempo
let the record show looking out the window
honest faces....false need for traces,
a perfumed bottle of Musk stay in touch
the innocent were objective to it pain
AIDS took this carefree soldier to its game


Scheme XAXBXXXXX XCCXX XXXXXX BXBBXXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 1000101111101 110111101101 10110110100110100 101101111111101 1111010111 010110101001 101111100101 11110010101 1101011010 01111011110111 0101010111 1101 1110101110 1101011101110110 1111100101 101010101001 1011110100101111101 10100 100100111101111 110010110101 11011010 0110111111 111110110111 10011101010 1011110 0011011101 01000010111 111110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,283
Words 242
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 9, 5, 6, 8
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 260
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Submitted by hitalot on December 27, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:12 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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