Analysis of Fling



We love the way it burns, destined to never learn, maybe we purposely dropped the wall, we didn't know each at all, both counterfeit all along, thinking this was unique and strong, 20 yrs only I guess we were so phony,
Hid our fortress unless you walked through the gate, the constant battle between choice and fate, even if we had started with a blank slate, now the only time I see you is in a dream state, I didn't always feel this hate, unforgettable memories we chose to make, a future we planned to create, before the apple was even used by the snake, I rather be alone for the rest of my days, making sure that I learned and not repeat old ways, bruised when I finally knew what you think I am, we both never tried to comprehend or understand, looking back we both don't listen and hate to be wrong, deep down I think we both knew it wouldn't last long, no foundation of trust, well that's new info and unjust, I'm repeating the same darn cycle , thanks, you burned me alive Michael, I can't truly blame nothing on you, true love is rarely revealed to a few, rebuild and renovate is the current stage, I guess it does get harder as you age, or is it easier based on your yearly wage, must have been a crack in my castle, repairing currently for the next master, faster and faster, MY LOVE DIDN'T COST ANYTHING, CAN'T COMPARE TO IT A SIMPLE FLING, MY LOVE DIDN'T COST NOTHING JEZABEL AND LILITH DIDN'T CRY FOR A FLING


Scheme AB
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111011011011001011101111110101101101011101110110 11010011110101010011011011110101110101111100111101111010010011110101110101010110110111010110111110111101011111110011111111101101101101111100111111111111101110101111110001101001110111101101110110111111001101010101010111111101111111001111011110101100101001011010010111011010111010111101101010101101
Characters 1,423
Words 269
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 2
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 554
Words per line (avg) 135
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,107
Words per stanza (avg) 270
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Submitted on September 01, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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