Analysis of Beneathe The Evening



The leaders of light are now all sleeping
 no more will they stand proud above the dawn
 And the murderers who left the crowds all weeping
 Remain alive to cast hate on and on

Every scent of fear has warnings to remember
 every echo in the thunder sends new calls
 Watch your step between October and December
 come the new year you will find blood upon the walls

The bullets make their way to form destruction
 our world will face its end quite this style
 Shattered dreams are just the truth of each obstruction
 And for now they gather close around the Nile

Where a man has died for being strong and bold
 as he walks in dignity toward heaven’s halls
 Here will rest the lasting signs of regal talent
 near the death marks of the blood upon the walls

There once was someone singing to the masses
 he asked for peace with grand imagination
 His soul now gone, and body only ashes
 the victim of a lost fool’s situation

Beware of winter’s frost and autumn’s browning
 the simple sound of nature soon enthralls
 When the seasons change and smiling lips are frowning
 be assured it’s only blood upon the walls

There comes a day when you will seek for glory
 the promised land which shows the best of times
 Reality may tell a different story
 it’s not for us to live between the lines

And the optimist will spend his days believing
 while tomorrow speaks of destiny that crawls
 For wherever love is found
 beneath the evening

Scarlet morning waits with blood upon the walls


Scheme AXAX BCBC DEDE XCXC FDFD ACAC GXGX ACXA C
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111110 1111110101 001001101110 0101111101 1001111101010 100100010111 111010100010 101111110101 01011111010 1011111111 101110111010 01111010101 10111110101 111010001101 111010111010 10111010101 1111101010 1111110010 11110101010 0101011010 0111010110 010111011 101010101110 10111010101 11011111110 0101110111 1011010010 1111110101 001001111010 1011110011 1010111 01010 10101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,461
Words 266
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted by hitalot on June 12, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:19 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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