Analysis of To My Beloved Daughter Melissa (On Your 40th Birthday)



Your voice called out early
  when I needed it most

And you turned me around
  providing great hope

I was lost till you found me
  from the heavens beyond

And the love that you sent
  in my heart would grow strong

I knew it was you
  calling out to me clear

In the depths of my wandering
  your voice was so dear

You opened your heart
  and my spirit was yours

A life we now share
  with each day evermore

As the years have progressed
  our memories have grown

Through marriage and distance
  and grandchildren sewn

You rescued my spirit
  when I needed you most

From my depths of refusal
  you vanquished the ghost

I’ll never be able
  to thank you enough

For the light that you brought me
  your angelic touch

And I still need you now
  more than ever before

To love me and guide me
  to save me once more

From the future you called
  in those darkest of times

My heart yours to reign
 —cherished daughter of mine

(Villanova Pennsylvania: May 2, 2018)


Scheme AB XX AX XX XC XC XX XD XE XE XB FB FX AX XD AD XX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 111011 011101 01011 1111111 101001 001111 011111 11111 101111 00111100 11111 11011 011011 01111 11110 101101 1010011 110010 0101 110110 111011 1111010 11001 110110 11101 1011111 1101 011111 111001 111011 11111 101011 011011 11111 101011 0100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 923
Words 177
Sentences 1
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on May 02, 2018

Modified on April 30, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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