Analysis of When You Ain't Got Nothin



Chasing my thirst into the
  desert at night,
  Otis Redding was right….
   “You don’t miss the water till the well runs dry”

And marrying the wrong woman
  for the second time,
  Smokey Robinson was right….
   “You better shop around”

Writing my pen empty with the
  same old words,
  Cat Stevens was right….
   “The first cut truly is the deepest”

And living in Macon because
  I thought it was safe,
  Charlie Daniels was right….
    “The devil did come down to Georgia”

Losing my religion only to
  seek God again,
  Robert Plant was right….
   “You can’t buy a stairway to heaven”

And when I’m alone and desperate and have
   nowhere left to turn,
   Bob Dylan was the most righteous of all….
   “When you ain’t got nothin, you got nothin to lose”

(Villanova Pennsylvania: March, 2018)


Scheme ABBX CXBX AXBX XXBA XXBC XXXX X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 1011010 1011 101011 11101010111 01000110 10101 1010011 110101 10111010 111 11011 011101010 01001001 11111 101011 010111110 101010101 1101 10111 11101110 0110101001 1111 1101011011 111110111011 0100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 813
Words 133
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 15, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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