Analysis of One Last Choice



When the world becomes heavy,
  take it inside

When the waves breach the levee,
  take it inside

When she just won’t stop asking,
  take it inside

When a friend is unmasking,
  take it inside

When the children have gone,
  take it inside

When the bad guys have won,
  take it inside

When the armies advance,
  take it inside

When you haven’t a chance,
  take it inside

When night lays unclaimed,
  take it inside

When excuses are blamed,
  take it inside

When the money’s all spent,
  take it inside

When your emotion’s been lent,
  take it inside

When the mime begins talking,
  take it inside

When the end comes back knocking,
  take it inside

When the music plays hollow,
  take it inside

When the Angels build lean-to’s,
  take it inside

When the berries have been picked,
  take it inside

When the Pope throws a fit,
  take it inside

When the words just won’t come,
  take it inside

When the choice zero-sum,
  take it inside

“Inside there’s a fortress,
      with ramparts of light

“One choice beyond choosing,
    —one vision beyond sight”

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2018)


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (36%)
Metre 1010110 1101 1011010 1101 1111110 1101 10111 1101 101011 1101 101111 1101 101001 1101 11101 1101 11101 1101 101011 1101 101011 1101 1101011 1101 1010110 1101 1011110 1101 1010110 1101 1010111 1101 1010111 1101 101101 1101 101111 1101 101101 1101 011010 1111 110110 110011 010010100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,071
Words 183
Sentences 1
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 35
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on February 14, 2018

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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