Analysis of Light house



Evasive splashes rise and fall
Leaving but a trace of mist
To reflect
The taste of awe
For gaping jaws to admit

Could it have been?
Pointers light the way
While the house stares on as the willow
With pursed lips and nothing to say

Catch a slice in frames
Slice a piece to save
Give the rest for the next
To cherish the foggy days

Slide right through the bars
Skip right through the links
Mellow in the bush alone
In wait for the Humpbacks’ wink

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Poetic Form
Metre 01010101 1010111 101 0111 1101101 1111 10101 10111101 11101011 10101 10111 101101 1100101 11101 11101 1000101 011011 1111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 501
Words 93
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by BrendenPettingill on February 12, 2018

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Brenden Pettingill

Aloha, My name is B. A Pettingill, I'm a writer, traveller, teacher, and waterman. From Hawaii, I write my thoughts inspirations and daydreams too. So enjoy these pieces of me, and share if it appeals to you :) Mahalo more…

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