Analysis of Woman what I love
women what I love
the waves and curves
and soft linen to disguise what lies beneath
my gaze surfs, in lines
up and down from bottom to crown
the straights too
and the curly cues
like mine
and their eyes
better than heels, jewels and disguises
guiding me in winks and smiles
I don’t need teeth and dimples
but those make me smile back
and often
even the wrinkles and drops hold me
the softness, wrapped up in a blanket
out of the shower, out of the bath, out of the water
out of the darkness
no woman no cry
not dry, not wet, but soaking
and perfect
I watch you mimic the skies
You know better than I
swaying hips alternating with lips
from a song never sung more beautifully
bare feet and painted toes on mahogany
squinting with an inquisitive look and glasses to magnify
a lens for us both to look closer
delicate hands that could pick me apart
guiding me back to a pillowed embrace and a head on a heart
wrapped up and letting the tears flow
letting hairs entangle like limbs do
and their music, with lips alternating
sweeter than the tree’s syrup and the humming nectar
a violin serenating, a guitar to pluck and a piano to push
keys back into their locks, to twist open again
fiercely independent self love,
fiercely independent to ask questions as such:
Why? How? Is it enough? Is it too much?
silence comforts the sensation by your banks
with warm water and fluid strokes
wrap me up in your blanket
like we used to do before and after and in between
I remember nine months and lights and shadows
and often times forget them too
woman what I love
eyes, hearts, an age, a shape and a cuteness that comes by rhythms and blues
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Metre | 10111 0101 01101011101 11101 10111011 011 00101 11 011 1011100010 1010101 1111010 111111 010 100100111 010110010 11010110111010 11010 11011 1111110 001 1111001 111011 10110011 1011011100 11010110100 101101001010110 011111110 1001111101 101110101001101 11010011 101010111 011011100 1010110001010 00011001110001011 110111111001 1001011 10010111011 1111011111 10100010111 11100101 1110110 11111010100001 1010110101 01010111 10111 11110100101111001 1111110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,663 |
Words | 313 |
Sentences | 7 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 10, 6, 6, 7, 7, 6, 1 |
Lines Amount | 48 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 170 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
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Submitted by BrendenPettingill on January 16, 2018
Modified on March 14, 2023
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