Analysis of Sex & Black Velvet Cake



Love under lock and key...
an exquisite sunset, 'O' paints pretty colors, before
a maiden's heart dances, piroettes beneath the straight,
moonbeams bointe to her fate as she waits patiently
a devine key will unlock her heart,
revelation will reward her patience
a paired key is waiting on the  other side of the moon
this key courts the perfect lock
moon shadows waltz serenely under a black velvet shy
shooting stars are messengers carrying her call for you

such is black velvet cake a bit creamy to taste it permeates your stomach's residue
"An eternity, I have waited, oh how long I've dreamed of you,
Every minute of forever you'll be locked in my heart".

Oh, hear her plea, please grant her desire
End her search for her dream to come true
Raprure from above..rain, a soothing lulaby,
Floating..adrift..in dreams your key is hers
Wishing herself away to sweet, tender oblivion,
She has waited too long for your key
Dark depths of hihility, infinite space
She will await you in the middle of the abyss
Dance towards the moonbeams, they point to your face
She prays your key will unlock her dream

"An eternity, I have waited, oh how long I have dreamed of you,
Every minute of forever you'll be locked in my heart".

Are you the keeper of the key to her heart ?
Come dance with her...under the moon
Worship her in the moonlight with a passionate dance
Whisper your secrets,  exchange your trinkets,
Your key matches her heart and her heart unlocks yours
Moon shadows waltz serenely under a black velvet cake
Shooting stars are messengers, telling the rest of the world,
You've finally unlocked her heart
Dance toward the moonbeams,
They point to your fate.
sex and black  velvet cake


Scheme axbacxdxxe eeC xexxxafxfx eC cdxxxgxcxbg
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 1100111101001 0111010101 11101111100 001110101 010101010 01111010101101 1110011 11101001001101 10111001000111 1111010110111101110 1010011101111111 100101010111011 1101110010 101101111 1110101 111110 10010111100100 111011111 11111001 1101100101001 1010111111 111110101 10100111011111111 100101010111011 11010101101 111101 100001101001 1011001110 11100100111 11101001001101 10111001001101 11000101 10101 11111 101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,710
Words 307
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 10, 3, 10, 2, 11
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 275
Words per stanza (avg) 60
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Submitted by hitalot on October 29, 2017

Modified on March 14, 2023

1:32 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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