Analysis of The Hound of Heaven



steps to reach the highest rung
 a heart so full of the undone
 we have been through miles but caused no pain
 a given chance at which to rearrange
 yet something deep inside beckons & draws me to come near
 I shed a single tear to numb the inner pain
 we break free and set sail onto the vast expanse of the day
 are we humble enough to ever bow the knee to pray
 the hound in heaven call us home
 yet like a dog without its bone
 we make the journey all alone
 suffocated inside we tend to hide
 shattered glass drifting from the dark memories of my past
 we lay hold of the feeling hoping that it would last
 to treasure a red rose that was plucked a time before
 savor each memory fondly
 deep in my heart there is a memory
 living in the land of make believe
 one must be willing to achieve
 to hold off shooting the gun in your hand
 hopefully someday you will understand
 you can't go through life thinking what might have been
 won't you help me my friend Lord Jesus
 to trust in a power greater then self
 never to give into the finish line without first an encounter with your silent partner
 hound in heaven seeks you & me
 leading us onward to sweet victory


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 01111001 111111111 010111101 1101011011111 110101110101 111011100101101 11100111010111 01010111 11010111 11010101 100011111 10110101100111 1111010101111 1100111110101 10110010 1011110100 100011101 11110101 1111001011 10011101 11111101111 111111110 1100101011 10110101010111010111010 1010111 1011011100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,161
Words 227
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 925
Words per stanza (avg) 225
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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