Analysis of Love's Destiny



a tiny seed was dropped out from a farmer's bag
 onto the fertile soil in time roots would spring up
 through the duration of time we have created a rhyme
 a pulse of the heart will light the spark to where we need to go

What hurts you the most ? Is it fear or death ?
 the tranquil pier on a clear brisk morn
 clouds over hang to bring a pale atmosphere
 each of us elapse in our own inner thoughts

reckless wanderers as distant nomadic herdsmen
 with all the twists and turns through snap shot variation in a dream
 we then come to a better understanding from deeper within
 love is the essence of our eternal existence

learn to cultivate honest laughter with a smile
 to know all the great while we each our accountable
 Oh, Lord, I love you so much
 Possessing such a forgiving touch

Praising your name doesn't seem enough
 Through past times that were so rough,
 No matter where or what I may do,
 My path always leads to you

Life is not a mystery to me;
 It's all about setting one's self free
 Lord, you make me feel whole and complete
 Knowing only I can ever cause my defeat

Keep me from all that which is profane
 Humble me Lord, in Jesus name
 My heart is forever in the Lord
 Where all stand fast of one accord

In this world I am but flesh and bone
 I no longer wander, I have found my home.


Scheme XXXX XXXX AXAX XXBB CCDD EEFF XXGG XX
Poetic Form
Metre 010111110101 100101011111 10110111101001 011011101111111 1110111111 010110111 1101110110 111010101101 1010011001010 110101111010001 111101001011001 11010110010010 11101010101 11101111100100 1111111 010100101 101110101 1111011 110111111 111111 111010011 110110111 111111001 101011101101 111111101 10110101 111010001 11111101 011111101 11101011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,320
Words 257
Sentences 3
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by hitalot on July 20, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:17 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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