Analysis of Blood That Woudn't Yield



You thought that you could skip a stitch,
  the thread provided free

You thought no one would ever notice,
  just one small opening

The seam then weakened steadily,
  threads loosened left and right

Excuses now unraveling,
  Old Glory taking flight

The sinew given strong and taut,
  to seal the danger out

But that one stitch you failed to close,
  won’t mute the nightmare’s shout

Miss Ross is now in mourning,
  as the stars have left the field

That one stitch you’ve forsaken,
 —draining blood that wouldn’t yield

(Villanova Pennsylvania: March, 2017)


Scheme XA XB AC BC XD XD BE XE X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 010101 111111010 111100 01110100 110101 01010100 110101 0110101 110101 11111111 11011 1111010 1011101 1111010 101111 0100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 550
Words 91
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 48
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on March 22, 2017

Modified on March 27, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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